Presentaions Part 1Review

It was really neat to see everyone's project.  There were many different editing styles and the subjects were all interesting.

Kelly- International UNH- The audio was difficult to hear and understand at some parts.  I like the basketball clip, it showed a movement to the words that people were saying.

Alexandra-  The Fire Fighters-  I really loved your creative pictures such as the eagle view picture.  Maybe you could add pics of a fire or of a flood they referenced too.  It was great that you added the stats to the piece.

Emma- SHARPP - I think if you slowed down the photo transition you could choose the more powerful ones in your slide which would really make a difference. I really like the photos you showed of her walking alone at the end.  The blurred photos at the bar were nice as well.  It was awesome that you tackled such a tough topic.

Brian- Whiffle Ball- Your interviews were excellent; they were both descriptive and informative.  I really liked your use of interchanging photos with video.  I think you could have talked a little more about the league and the teams themselves- How are they funded? 

Peter-  The silent driving video was really cool!  I thought it seemed a little like a documentary instead of a multimedia news project.  Maybe you could add the issues of the new town ordinances into the conversation to make things interesting.  I also thought you could show pictures of parties and the destructiveness that comes with living off campus because the photos of the house you showed were all neat and clean, which probably isn't like many off campus living places.